Pool Rules: Part 1 Good job
Let's summarize that rediculous last review and make some sence of it... yawn....
Good Graphics, bad style, nice sound, dry (but good) humour, okay movie.
Let's talk about the only issue with your movie: Style.
You really need to revamp your style. The movie, although the graphics are awesome, lacked alot of energy from the characters. And I know that you were going for that dry humour in your characters, but you need to make them more alive, and a bit less robotic. The review was right about you needing to change the angles of your characters, not necessesarily diagonal... but with a more casual posture and less standing up and down vertical. A character's posture will speak long before their mouth does. And as for copying other animators... that's a load of shit. Don't copy anyone... do what you do, and evolve your way. You might want to look at some other animations and see how they give life to the body langage of their characters, but don't look at newgrounds... look at TV and Disney movies and shit, and real people. If you ever saw someone standing perfectly upright with their arms at their sides, occasionally rotating them as they talked, you'd think they were nuts.
And you can't draw a building like you did in the first scene... If you want to have a building with a perspective AND a moving camera, the back of the building has to follow the camera accordingly.
"Rolling"